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Online peer feedback that improves argumentative essays

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A structure-focused online peer feedback module improved university students’ argumentative essay quality across courses and degree levels.

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Design, implementation, and evaluation of an online supported peer feedback module to enhance students' argumentative essay quality

Noroozi O, Banihashem SK, Biemans HJA, et al. · Education and information technologies · 2023

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Design
Other — Pre–post evaluation of a structure-focused online peer-feedback essay module
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N=284 · 284 of 330 students across five courses completed the module
Population
Bachelor and master students at Wageningen University across course domains
Outcome
Argumentative essay quality before vs after guided peer feedback

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What learning outcome did the online peer feedback module target?

To what extent does the supported online peer feedback module affect students’ argumentative essay writing performance?

What happened to essay quality from pre-test to post-test?

the argumentative essay writing performance of all students has significantly improved from pre-test to post-test
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What they did

Researchers designed an online supported peer feedback module centered on argumentative essay structure and implemented it at Wageningen University across bachelor and master courses in several domains. Students wrote essays, exchanged guided peer feedback online, and revised; essay quality was scored before and after the module on recognized argument elements.

What they found

Essay performance improved significantly from pre-test to post-test with a large effect size, including gains across recognized elements of high-quality argumentative writing. Improvements held across course domains and for both bachelor and master students, with only limited level-specific differences on some elements.

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What it doesn't show

Without a no-feedback or alternative-feedback control group, the study cannot isolate peer feedback from practice, instructor effects, or other course activities. Results come from one Dutch research university and may not generalize to other writing genres or less structured online setups.

Key terms

Peer feedback
Learners review and comment on each other’s work to support revision and learning.
Argumentative essay
A written text that takes a position and supports it with claims, evidence, and responses to opposing views.
Scalability
Whether an instructional tool works across many courses, domains, and learner levels—not just one class.
Pre-test/post-test
Measuring the same performance before and after an intervention to track change.
Partial eta squared
An effect-size statistic describing how much variance an effect explains in multivariate analyses.

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Did the module only help students in writing-heavy social science courses?

No. Gains appeared across the sampled science and social-science domains, with no significant overall domain differences in improvement.

Did master’s students benefit more than bachelor’s students?

Overall essay-quality gains did not differ significantly by level, though master’s students improved more on some justification elements.

What made this peer feedback “supported”?

The module guided students with structure-oriented prompts tied to argumentative essay elements rather than leaving feedback fully open-ended.

Was improvement only in overall grades?

No. Gains were reported for the overall essay and for the recognized elements of high-quality argumentative writing.

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